The three boys run as fast as they can because the volcano is about to explode and the stone people are chasing the three kids. Then right as the volcano erupts and the stone get right on top of them, they jump into a boat waiting for them at the coast line,and they go away with the same person that drove the air plane on the way to the island.
Someone must have set bubytraps. I am glad thats over. What about the tresour? Hey, whats that shiny thing? Is that the tresuar? Lets go check it out. What do you know it is. We finally found it lets go home and figure out how where going to use it. Lets start are own tresure hunt company. Lets do it.
I think the story should end by They find the treasure.After batleing giant snakes, crocodiles,and the dangerous Stone People.They all will be bilionars from the treasure.
I would like it to end when the volcano earopes.But Bob , Harold , and Joe get off right on time. When they are riding back the engine breaks, but they jump off in LA.
George, Bob, and Harold were running from the ancient Stone People. They had triggered a trap that had made the Stone People rise from the dead. Harold tripped and fell over a cliff. Suddenly, a plane appeared and flew right under him in time to to catch him. Harold was still screaming inside the plane. The others jumped into the plane. They headed back toward the Stone People in hopes of turning them back into stone. When they arrived at the Stone People's ancient ruins, George was looking everywhere for a trigger. All of a sudden, Bob tripped over a trample line, and immediately a gigantic gust of wind swept through the whole island. They journeyed further into the temple ruins and found Stone People as still as statues. They had finally escaped the horrors of this island. The End
The story should end when they find the lost treasure. Also Bob will find the girlfriend of his life. They should get famous and in the Genius Book of World Records.
I would see Bob Harold and Billy find the gold.I think Bod got his dream girl. I think they got picked up by a airplane at the end of the story.I think all of them got rich.
I think the story ends that the stone people come alive and they have to battle to get the treasure. The three men became famus because they found the very valuble treasure of the stone peaple.Now everyone wants to be Harold girl friend.
I think the end should be when venturing in the forest bob trips over a trip wire and the mountain opens up and 84 stone woriers march out and Gorge, Harald, and Bob have to fight them till 4 are dead.Then the other stone woriers will lead them to the stone people's vilage and the adventures will have to find the tresure on there own.
I think harold should bring his surgery kit, just in case. In the end the volcano erupts and burns the camera man's foot very badly and Harold has to do surgery on him. After Harold does surgery on the camera man he goes off and biulds a signal fire and a helicopter sees it and comes and rescues them.
I want them to fight against the stone people. Also makea daring escape to jump off the volcano. I want them to be billion airs.Get their faces on mount. Rushmore for their amazing discovery. Everyone is happy at the end.
This is how I probably want the story to end. The adventurers, Bob, George, and Harold, are running from the stone people and a volcano that is about to burst. Suddenly, they stumble over something. They quickly pick it up, and jump into the boat that brought them there. On the way back to their home, they discover what they picked up. It is the Ark of the Covenant. When they get home they start earning money. First, they donate the Ark of the Covenant to the Military Storage Warehouse. Then they become actors. They play Bob, George, and Harold in the movie Bob made later, The Great Ark of the Covenant Search. After that they win the Nobel Peace Prize back-to-back-to-back-to-back years. And George wins the girl of his dreams. Later they buy mansions and become the world's most rich people. The End
I think they will be attacked by the stone people. they will kill the stone people. Then they wil get the treasure and return home.
ReplyDeleteThe three boys run as fast as they can because the volcano is about to explode and the stone people are chasing the three kids. Then right as the volcano erupts and the stone get right on top of them, they jump into a boat waiting for them at the coast line,and they go away with the same person that drove the air plane on the way to the island.
ReplyDeleteSomeone must have set bubytraps. I am glad thats over. What about the tresour? Hey, whats that shiny thing? Is that the tresuar? Lets go check it out. What do you know it is. We finally found it lets go home and figure out how where going to use it. Lets start are own tresure hunt company. Lets do it.
ReplyDeleteI think the story should end by They find the treasure.After batleing giant snakes, crocodiles,and the dangerous Stone People.They all will be bilionars from the treasure.
ReplyDeleteI would like it to end when the volcano earopes.But Bob , Harold , and Joe get off right on time. When they are riding back the engine breaks, but they jump off in LA.
ReplyDeleteGeorge, Bob, and Harold were running from the ancient Stone People. They had triggered a trap that had made the Stone People rise from the dead. Harold tripped and fell over a cliff. Suddenly, a plane appeared and flew right under him in time to to catch him. Harold was still screaming inside the plane. The others jumped into the plane. They headed back toward the Stone People in hopes of turning them back into stone. When they arrived at the Stone People's ancient ruins, George was looking everywhere for a trigger. All of a sudden, Bob tripped over a trample line, and immediately a gigantic gust of wind swept through the whole island. They journeyed further into the temple ruins and found Stone People as still as statues. They had finally escaped the horrors of this island.
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The story should end when they find the lost treasure. Also Bob will find the girlfriend of his life. They should get famous and in the Genius Book of World Records.
ReplyDeleteI would see Bob Harold and Billy find the gold.I think Bod got his dream girl. I think they got picked up by a airplane at the end of the story.I think all of them got rich.
ReplyDeleteI think the story ends that the stone people come alive and they have to battle to get the treasure. The three men became famus because they found the very valuble treasure of the stone peaple.Now everyone wants to be Harold girl friend.
ReplyDeleteI think the end should be when venturing in the forest bob trips over a trip wire and the mountain opens up and 84 stone woriers march out and Gorge, Harald, and Bob have to fight them till 4 are dead.Then the other stone woriers will lead them to the stone people's vilage and the adventures will have to find the tresure on there own.
ReplyDeleteI think harold should bring his surgery kit, just in case. In the end the volcano erupts and burns the camera man's foot very badly and Harold has to do surgery on him. After Harold does surgery on the camera man he goes off and biulds a signal fire and a helicopter sees it and comes and rescues them.
ReplyDeleteI think Bob,George,and Harold should find what they are all looking for. Also they should have to build a raft so they can get off the island.
ReplyDeleteI love your endings. There are so many creative ideas, guys!
ReplyDeleteI think the stone people might atack them. They might also put them in jail. Will they find the tresher?
ReplyDeleteDavid O that was great. I like the last part and the girlfreind
ReplyDeleteJim, I like yours because it's long and gives a lot of detail. I like the thing about the cliff.
ReplyDeleteThe story will end that Bob, Herald, and George find treasure. And Bob finds the girl of his dreams. Also they stay rich for the rest of their lives
ReplyDeleteI want them to fight against the stone people. Also makea daring escape to jump off the volcano. I want them to be billion airs.Get their faces on mount. Rushmore for their amazing discovery. Everyone is happy at the end.
ReplyDeleteMatthew, I loved how you said the story ends. What you said that I liked was they had a battle for the tresure. And how they came famus.
ReplyDeleteAnders,
ReplyDeleteI really like your ending and how exiting it is!!!
Anders, I loved your coment it sounds so exciting!
ReplyDeleteI like Jim's because it has a lot of detail.
ReplyDeleteMs.Millar, thank you for the generous coment for the endings!
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Anders, your comment is cool. I like how you did the stone people. You did every thing right.
ReplyDeleteEv I loved your end but I would like it if you added more detail.
ReplyDeleteWalker-I loved your ending but you could add some detail to it. Stillman
ReplyDeleteThis is how I probably want the story to end. The adventurers, Bob, George, and Harold, are running from the stone people and a volcano that is about to burst. Suddenly, they stumble over something. They quickly pick it up, and jump into the boat that brought them there. On the way back to their home, they discover what they picked up. It is the Ark of the Covenant. When they get home they start earning money. First, they donate the Ark of the Covenant to the Military Storage Warehouse. Then they become actors. They play Bob, George, and Harold in the movie Bob made later, The Great Ark of the Covenant Search. After that they win the Nobel Peace Prize back-to-back-to-back-to-back years. And George wins the girl of his dreams. Later they buy mansions and become the world's most rich people.
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Lee, I really like how you used them getting their faces on Mount Rushmore.
ReplyDeleteMatthew, I loved your end story. I loved it when you said there was a battle. I loved it so much.
ReplyDeleteRichard, That was totally awesome. I've never seen some one that has a great imagination.
ReplyDeleteJames, Great Idea with the ark. Did they die when they thouched it?
ReplyDeleteStuart, use the dicionary to check words that you don't know how to spell.
ReplyDeleteMatthew that was great!! I like that the stone people come back to life!
ReplyDeleteMatthew, thanks for the nice comment on my ending.
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Walker, I like the comment you posted on my ending.
ReplyDeleteyours truly ANDERS
Walker,
ReplyDeleteI really like your ending and how he helps one of his friends when he is in great danger.
Matthew,
ReplyDeleteI really like your ending it is so funny!!!
Ev, I love your ending because it's creative.
ReplyDeleteJim, great detail!
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